Purpose: To tell about an experience from camp, using short sentences to create suspense.
WALT: Entertain (recount)Task: To write a recount based on something scary or suspenseful that happened to you.
Criteria: I canSelf Assessment
Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture)
Name: Maia B
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done?
Comment: Awesome story Georgia. I like how you used lots of speech marks.